I'm sure it means "forehead" (assuming it's a woman he means to depict), like she's braiding bramble-roses together as a wreath for her brow. Don't know why the plural though. Some kind of archaism maybe?
Or maybe also it's meant to suggest the brows of hills, braided with bramble-roses? White, though... pale grasses? Who knows. I actually like it more for the vagueness of it. My own brain tends to sharpen and polish everything to death if you know what I mean, so I sometimes like writing that's a bit vague, obtuse or obscure... impressionistic rather than photorealism.
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(misses you)
(wants to braid your hair now)
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Thanks for sharing the poetry.
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