Veronica Mars. Veronica Mars/Lilly Kane. 025. Strangers AND 1. Beginnings AND 2. Middles AND 3. Ends

Oct 15, 2006 19:45

Title: Strangers
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Characters: Veronica Mars/Lilly Kane
Prompt: 025: Strangers
Word Count: 139
Rating: PG-ish.
Summary: Nobody asked why.
Author's Notes:This set's for Nell kwatchingoverme 'cause she's wonderful.

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worldwasasong October 16 2006, 02:26:55 UTC
Huh. AU and very weird with a new character. I like her, but at the same time I don't because she got between Lilly and Veronica and in my loyalty to them I hate that. I mean, intellectually I understand that she fit with them, but at the same time I don't want her there. And I don't understand the last one, not quite. Did they all separate and go in different directions? How sad!!

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lillerina October 16 2006, 06:57:03 UTC
Well, in my head she kind of brought them back together when they started to drift apart, although this was a friendship set, not relationship. And the last one, Nell left so that they could fit together as the two of them again, but she never really saw the others so she didn't know if they stayed friends (although in my head they did). In some respects, yes, it is sad (but I couldn't think of a happy way to write a fic about endings). I'm sorry you didn't like her, I think I found her too challenging to write to want to write her more. I guess this one didn't really work the way I hoped it was going to. Thanks for the feedback, though :)

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worldwasasong October 16 2006, 23:07:24 UTC
It's not so much that I didn't like her as a character, I'm just very posessive of Lilly/Veronica and didn't want her coming between them. And, wow, I just realized she shares my name! How cool/weird/unsettling, :).

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worldwasasong October 16 2006, 23:13:38 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, and then I just saw the dedication--is breathless and flattered and happy. Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! ::Bounce!!:: ...Those are really the only words for it!!! :) ...Yes, I'm TOTALLY, SOOOO SLOW noticing these things! But you should know you just totally made my day!! You're wonderful too, darling! Oh, and I read your comment and then reread the fics and now they're a little more clear. It makes more sense when I think of it as friendship instead of a threesome, :). I think the thing that threw me off was that "she" was not identified in the last fic, so I really couldn't tell who had left and who had stayed behind. But now it's all clear. I like it! I'm glad Lilly and Veronica stayed friends. Well of COURSE they did! Lol.

Oh, P.S. I'm working an idea for the next part of This Little Girl. I'm not sure if it will happen, but...just so you know, in case you wanted to know...

::Hugs:: Thanks so much again for the dedication!

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punkprincessabz October 17 2006, 21:12:28 UTC
These are great, I'd definately love to see more of this Eleanor character. Nice interpretation of Lilly in the first ficlet too.

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lillerina October 17 2006, 22:42:33 UTC
Thanks. I love playing on Lilly's vulnerability and insecurity - there has to be a reason she acts like that, and it's classic self destructive behaviour. Eleanor is a little quieter, but still won't shut up, so I might bring her back in another fic, maybe a longer one next time.

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