Huh. AU and very weird with a new character. I like her, but at the same time I don't because she got between Lilly and Veronica and in my loyalty to them I hate that. I mean, intellectually I understand that she fit with them, but at the same time I don't want her there. And I don't understand the last one, not quite. Did they all separate and go in different directions? How sad!!
Well, in my head she kind of brought them back together when they started to drift apart, although this was a friendship set, not relationship. And the last one, Nell left so that they could fit together as the two of them again, but she never really saw the others so she didn't know if they stayed friends (although in my head they did). In some respects, yes, it is sad (but I couldn't think of a happy way to write a fic about endings). I'm sorry you didn't like her, I think I found her too challenging to write to want to write her more. I guess this one didn't really work the way I hoped it was going to. Thanks for the feedback, though :)
It's not so much that I didn't like her as a character, I'm just very posessive of Lilly/Veronica and didn't want her coming between them. And, wow, I just realized she shares my name! How cool/weird/unsettling, :).
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, and then I just saw the dedication--is breathless and flattered and happy. Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! ::Bounce!!:: ...Those are really the only words for it!!! :) ...Yes, I'm TOTALLY, SOOOO SLOW noticing these things! But you should know you just totally made my day!! You're wonderful too, darling! Oh, and I read your comment and then reread the fics and now they're a little more clear. It makes more sense when I think of it as friendship instead of a threesome, :). I think the thing that threw me off was that "she" was not identified in the last fic, so I really couldn't tell who had left and who had stayed behind. But now it's all clear. I like it! I'm glad Lilly and Veronica stayed friends. Well of COURSE they did! Lol.
Oh, P.S. I'm working an idea for the next part of This Little Girl. I'm not sure if it will happen, but...just so you know, in case you wanted to know...
Thanks. I love playing on Lilly's vulnerability and insecurity - there has to be a reason she acts like that, and it's classic self destructive behaviour. Eleanor is a little quieter, but still won't shut up, so I might bring her back in another fic, maybe a longer one next time.
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Oh, P.S. I'm working an idea for the next part of This Little Girl. I'm not sure if it will happen, but...just so you know, in case you wanted to know...
::Hugs:: Thanks so much again for the dedication!
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