Stare: A Zacharias and Daphne Fic

[lilli_evans]

Oh god help me! I'm about to post my first ever attempt at Angst...and since I'm such a Fluff girl please try to be nice and keep the criticism constructive.

Here it is: My random S.T.A.R boredom peice without any Beta...so ignore the spelling and the grammar mistakes to...sorry if its really bad grammar!

Stare
A Zacharias Smith/Daphne Greengrass

Comments

[miss_capricious]

I love it! Aww...poor Zach. X]

[lilli_evans]

*squee* one comment! Thanks! It was weird writing him cause I'd never made my characters like that before. ( I usually do MWPP cause they're so brady bunch like! ) *hugs*

[ryuugazaki]

Having it all in one paragraph made it a bit hard to read, but I guess it could be a "jumble of thoughts?" Haha...great job! Hope to see more from you ^^

[lilli_evans]

'Tis a big honor that I got commented by you! Lolz yeah I know I'm going to make it different paragraphs eventually. When I first wrote it it was much shorter. Like half of what it is now. I just kept adding when I was typing though. I'll probably change it into paragraphs rather than just one big one after ANTM and studying for French.

[perdyful_wishes]

since i read this fic a llong while ago i feel obligated to comment to this fic. Another reason is probably because you will kick my butt to non-existence but that matter shall not be discussed anymore. Does ur stories have to be soo sadd...*sniffs*...and as usual more mysterious than the last. Lol as thick as i am i took me long enough to figure out that this was Zachrias (cuz i read the name) and Daphne Fic. Well when u made me read on paper anyway. Keep Writing!! Ur inspiration and lol and u jus gave me inspiration for my story! *hugs*

[lilli_evans]

YAY! I GAVE MINELIE INSPIRATION!