Pros Fic: The Scruffy Dog

[lillianorchid]

First of all I'd like to apologise for not posting Fic more often, I've always been more of an artist than writer, but I enjoy doing both so I have to try and find time for both. :) I was in two minds about posting this as no one but me has read it, but I thought I might has well.

Title: The Scruffy Dog
Author: Lillian Orchid
Pairing and / or

Comments

[firlefanzine]

Very good!
The first two short parts are spot on. Perfect their different understanding of feeling 'guilty'!
And then there is a day in their life now, full of love and understanding.
I really like Scruffy.
Not fluffy at all! :-)

But may I play beta? Imo there ist too much 'smiling/smirking/grinning'. Some of them aren't
necessary at all.
- I hope you don't mind!!!? :-)

[lillianorchid]

Thanks a lot for reading. :D

But may I play beta? Imo there ist too much 'smiling/smirking/grinning'. Some of them aren't necessary at all.
I always do that, I write far too much about expressions even when it is not needed. I'll try not to do it so much in future. :D Thanks for the feedback, it all helps me improve. :) \o/

[sw33n3y]

Oh I really liked the way you used the scruffy dog to lead us into their past.

That last line in the Bodie paragraph was so poignant!

A heartfelt and lovely piece! :D

P.S.Ooh, thanks for the bandaged LC in bed icon. I do love that scene in WDW! :D

[lillianorchid]

I'm very glad you liked it! :D Thank you!

P.S.Ooh, thanks for the bandaged LC in bed icon. I do love that scene in WDW! :D You're welcome! lol I love that scene as well. :D

[byslantedlight]

I do like the first two little stories particularly - as Firle says above, they're spot on!

And hee that Bodie kept the scruffy dog that Doyle had always wanted... *g*

[lillianorchid]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't sure if maybe this was a bit too cute for a Pros-y fic at first, but I'm glad that people like it. :D

[hagsrus]

If you'd like it archived at Proslib please send me a copy - thanks!

Frances
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[lillianorchid]

I certainly will, Thank you! :D

[cloudless_9193]

“I always did like Scruffy things.” Bodie smirked. “I think that’s why I keep you around.” I really like this.
So sweet, all of it, I enjoyed it very much. Thanks! :-)

[lillianorchid]

Thank you for telling me what you liked about it! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it.