Halloweensie Entry

[lillpluta]

ZOMBIE SHARK

by Lill Pluta

Cackle of witch and screech of bat,
I’m not scared of any of that.

I bravely haunt the hallowed dark.
Until . . .
I meet the Zombie Shark.

He’s crusty, musty, rank, and mean
This beast could end my Halloween.

With jagged teeth, the monster nips.
I turn to run. My costume rips

Comments

Poem

[ext_3363282]

He's crusty, rusty, rank and mean! Love it. The onomatopoeia is awesome!

RE: Poem

[lillpluta]

Thanks!

[olmue]

Nice! (And my 7YO is a shark for Halloween this year. :) )

[lillpluta]

Thank you. :)

[anonymous]

Whew! Just in time! Well done, Lill!

[lillpluta]

Thanks. Yes, I squeaked in with this. Busy, busy times here.

[anonymous]

I love this story! So FUN!!

[lillpluta]

Ah, thank you so much!

[ext_3364464]

Funny and clever!!! Favorite stanza-
Rattle. Clatter. Plink. Kerplop!
One by one, the beast’s teeth drop.

[lillpluta]

Thank you, Penny!