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lilmissmagic236

another non-fiction

Feb 02, 2009 15:58

I Cheat the System

Before his phone call I was suffering from a severe episode of senioritis. It was my last semester of my high school career and I had nothing to do. I was president of the dance team and president of the drama club and no productions were coming up. My classes were a breeze and I had a tendency to sleep through them. I was ( Read more... )

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questionmarc927 February 3 2009, 03:47:15 UTC

This is really good! Great exposition in the beginning; you get the perfect idea and the story switches just as quickly as your brother's and your minds do. :D Then there's the conflict of the medical risk sign, and the resolution of saying "Screw you diabetes!" and going indoor skydiving anyway. ^_^ That is so super special awesome it's not even funny. I really like this; nicely done.