LJIdol 10: Topic 6: Heel Turn

[lilmissmagic71]

LJ Idol 10: TOPIC 6: Heel Turn

The old woman makes her way down the familiar block, past crumbling buildings and neglected brownstones. She keeps her eyes on the sidewalk, though it isn't to avoid meeting eyes with her neighbors. No one is out this evening. It's more to shield her aged eyes from the blinding cold. Everyone piling up together on

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

What horrible, hateful person! I do wonder why Martin married her (unless it was to find a mother for his children), and more still, why she married him and what she must have considered his "baggage."

Those children were better off not knowing how she really felt all those years. Yikes.

[penpusher]

Intensely descriptive and harrowing. It calls to mind what you would wish for your own worst enemy...

[eternal_ot]

Ah! Interesting read and I loved the descriptions which builds this character and makes you despise her. Amazing take! Good Job.

[marlawentmad]

Oh, the texture of this is irresistable. You fully succeeded in the character study. This is very well done.

[my_name_is_jenn]

This was so intense and so beautifully written. Very nicely done.