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Embers Chapter 2

Nov 12, 2011 10:56

Title: Embers
Author: LilMissRoadRage
Chapter: 2
Verse: IDW’ish AU
Words: 4400+
Rating: R for violence. I haven’t decided if I will writing anything steamy or not. Right now, I don’t think so. Story is still plenty violent and angsty for the rating. If you don’t like sad, depressing stories, this probably isn’t for you.
Summary: It’s six years after the ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

missmaryr November 13 2011, 01:22:08 UTC

Intriguing story. I really want to know who the buyer is; I keep thinking he's some kind of former Autobot.

lilmissroadrage November 14 2011, 03:34:12 UTC

Good guess! You'll have to wait and see though. :)

I promise that I started writing that as no one in particular, just a plot device and a means to an end for Mirage to get energon for his family. Quickly, the buyer became someone else. I won't say who though! :D!

iiiskaaa November 13 2011, 03:04:06 UTC

I like the world building in this chapter, and I'm also curious about this buyer - and whoever it was that noticed them right at the end. Watch out, Mirage!

lilmissroadrage November 14 2011, 03:35:01 UTC

Thank you!

Yes, the buyer is a curiosity in my own head, I do know who he is! I promise things will start heating up in the next few chapters, and not for the good! I'm so mean to my characters, bwuahahaha!

anavidbookworm November 14 2011, 18:38:09 UTC

You've done an excellent job of making this dark verse come alive. I'm continually intrigued and frightened by what might happen next. You have me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. :)