just a little poem I whipped up

Nov 27, 2006 19:45


Hurray ... I wrote a poem that for once doesn't suck... 
from today in sixth hour...
I am not sure who it is about or anything though
read it if ya want =)
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"The Check In"
Stop in
just to leave your mark
Scratch my heart
perhaps too slight
You dont even notice
heartlesly desert me again
without realizing
you forgot to check out
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_lackadaisy_ November 28 2006, 03:29:21 UTC
Sweet.. I love it!

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carlyjojo November 28 2006, 03:55:35 UTC
Clever and Quarky. I love it!

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ashlehelman November 30 2006, 20:17:02 UTC
I really really like it.. i can relate to it

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