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Fabulous sandiscully April 30 2009, 22:52:05 UTC
As always, a fabulous read. You really portray the characters in a true to life manner, and take us on a journey that wasn't shared on the screen, but may as well have been! Loved it! :)

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Re: Fabulous lilprincess8584 April 30 2009, 23:18:03 UTC
Thanks SandiS! I really enjoyed writing this one too. Their love is so pure - I'm destined to stay single if I keep holding out for this! Oops!

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lilprincess8584 April 30 2009, 23:17:02 UTC
Thanks honey! I loved writing this one - even if I did cry a little bit! I think that's my favourite bit as well.

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jo1013 April 30 2009, 23:14:00 UTC
Ah, the grey t shirt!
This is beautifully written darl and makes me realise why I shall always be single.
PS Happy as a clam - did ya have to ;)

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lilprincess8584 April 30 2009, 23:16:14 UTC
Of course, if only to make you squirm ;)

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memories_child May 1 2009, 06:11:37 UTC
You know I love it but that's alwaus worth repeating :) I love the imagery you use and your turn of pjrase; it really helps to create a sense of sorrow and desparation.

And yeah' I'm totally going to be single forever if I hold out for something like this!

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amalnahurriyeh May 2 2009, 02:21:40 UTC
This is sad and lovely--I love the image of them wasting time in bed to avoid having to confront reality. And the idea that they had a sense, some sense, of what was to come. Sigh.

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lilprincess8584 May 19 2009, 21:29:09 UTC
Thank you! I think this was my favourite to write - so sad though!

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