As always, a fabulous read. You really portray the characters in a true to life manner, and take us on a journey that wasn't shared on the screen, but may as well have been! Loved it! :)
You know I love it but that's alwaus worth repeating :) I love the imagery you use and your turn of pjrase; it really helps to create a sense of sorrow and desparation.
And yeah' I'm totally going to be single forever if I hold out for something like this!
This is sad and lovely--I love the image of them wasting time in bed to avoid having to confront reality. And the idea that they had a sense, some sense, of what was to come. Sigh.
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This is beautifully written darl and makes me realise why I shall always be single.
PS Happy as a clam - did ya have to ;)
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And yeah' I'm totally going to be single forever if I hold out for something like this!
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