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[lilpunkyone]

hmmm...i was bored. and inspired. so i wrote a hp fic. yess..Draco/Ginny goodness since that is my OTP. :)

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[_catastr0phe]

EEEEEEEEHHHHH.

I love Draco/Ginny. I loved that ficlett. (that is what I shall call short fics from now on :])

Ahhhh, you are a GREAT writer.

[lilpunkyone]

Haha, I call them ficlett's too.

THANKS!!

Draco/Ginny = the shyte.

[dementio]

I like it, despite the pairing, it is lovely.

The way you capitilize 'him' seems to give more power to the words. It's just this feeling that I have when I read it.

The only part that I think that's sort of out of place is this line: Him being Draco Malfoy.

Other than that, beautiful loveliness.

[lilpunkyone]

Thanks!

Thanks for the constructive criticism too!

[dementio]

Yes, YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER. Very droolwrothy indeed. <333

[crinkledpaper]

I liked what Sarah mentioned, with the "Him", it added something to the way she felt for Draco. This was quite awesome!

[lilpunkyone]

Thanks!

Yea, I added the "Him" parts to make it almost feel like he was godly of some sort to her.

[katho]

I actually love the "Him being Draco Malfoy", and I'd have to agree that, despite the pairing, this is fabulous.

[lilpunkyone]

Thanks!

[katho]

:D Welcome!

[complete]

Wow Kelly! YAY! for you writing! I liked this a lot. I love the capitalization of Him and He, nice.

There are some fragments here and there but I think they might work.

I like it muchly! *thumbs up* I didn't know you wrote, I'm glad you do! Gosh, we all have such talented friends.

[lilpunkyone]

Haha, yea, thanks!
I write. Sometimes. Not a whole lot though.

The fragments are all in there, because instead of typeing it in Word, I had just wrote it in my paper notebook and then re-typed it.

Too many talented people.. *shakes head*