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lilrednotebook

In the beginning..

Feb 02, 2005 21:39

Every thing has an origin - a definate beginning and end, save the immortal, if they exist. The universe began and will one day cease. Earth had a creation, and will have its end. Humans are born and die. But heros...heroes live ( Read more... )

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lilrednotebook September 8 2005, 00:03:14 UTC

This is the only part of the actual story I'm leaving public. The story itself is NOT this style of narration. I have duel first person narrators, Saphyre and Phoenix. Well, you understand why later.

I've had several comments that this narrating style wasn't good, but it's staying this way for now atleast. Rest assured that this is the only time you'll have a third person omniscienct narrator.