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Redo - Chapter 3

Mar 09, 2013 16:51

Title: Redo
Author: lilshorty7923
Rating: Eventual T but G for right now
Warnings: none, Ed's language maybe
Spoilers: This takes place after Brotherhood, so will have spoilers for that series
Pairings: Roy/Ed, Al/Winry
Summary: While chasing a rogue alchemist with his brother and Roy Mustang, a 22 year old Ed gets sent back in time, with Al, to right before ( Read more... )

fma, fic, redo

Comments 4

amethyst_koneko March 10 2013, 04:42:23 UTC

The first thing that jumped out at me was Ed's birthdate in the AN. Ed was born in 1899 not 1889. Might wanna fix that ( ... )

lilshorty7923 March 10 2013, 07:33:03 UTC

Thank you so much for the long review! I got ridiculously happy seeing that in my inbox lol ( ... )

shell_mel March 11 2013, 11:57:49 UTC

I'm glad to see another update. :)

Poor Roy is probably so confused. And the poor boys are stuck? That sucks. But it'll create lots of interesting plot devises and alterations to the story we all know and love. So looking forward to it. :)

lilshorty7923 March 11 2013, 17:29:29 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D

Hopefully, I won't confuse myself along with poor Roy trying to keep the timelines straight lol