Gap

Jul 22, 2006 23:46


Title: Gap
Challenge: Muggles
Word Count: 100
Characters: Lily

She hadn’t realized how far the distance was.
How separated they had become. Her friends could not relate to her at all.
Her parents were very proud, still… when they talked; it was evident that they were holding pages from separate books.

What she hated most of all was that her sister ( Read more... )

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coming_clean001 July 24 2006, 07:46:42 UTC
Awwwwww kinda angsty but really good. Love the last line. I don't think I'll have time to do this week's challenge -- I'm really busy this week, as I was last week. Grrrrrrrrrr school. =(

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evelynlela July 24 2006, 08:23:30 UTC
Thanks, and apparently my works tend to be rather angsty, no idea why... *shifty look* lol.
It's such a shame about school keeping you from writing fic, suppose that school is slightly more critical, in the end *is doubtful*

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saoirse_reaper July 27 2006, 02:58:15 UTC
Aww... that's sad :( but it's a great drabble/fic etc...
:)

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evelynlela July 27 2006, 06:04:26 UTC
Why thank you. But it is a bit sad, yes.

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