Not Looking/So Looking

[evelynlela]

Title: Not Looking

Words: 100

Challenge: Pride

Watching him score made Lily sick.
Knowing his friends turn to him for help made her mad.

Watching him play with that stolen snitch drove her crazy.

Knowing that he’d pass without studding brought her to tears.

Seeing James torment Severus brought her sick relief.

It gave her a way to yell at

Comments

[coming_clean001]

Mmmmm Interesting concept. I especially like the Lily one, and the titles are cool as well. <3

[evelynlela]

Well yes the Lily pov was what made me write the James one.
And thank you, I was hesitant about the titles, but now I'm glad I used them :)

[lionille]

I love how these two drabbles mirror each other, really clever!

[lionille]

I'm glad you liked them, thanks for the comment :)

[onyxzeconqueror]

ohh! i like these two!! super insight.

[evelynlela]

Thanks :)