Illusion

[lily_nee]

Title: Illusion
Genre: One Shot, Romance / Drama
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Because she is the most important person in his life ...
Paring: Aiba / OC
Note: I hope you like this OS, at least personally I'm happy, the result was what I imagined ^__^"

Comments

[ianne_xxyl]

At first I was jealous, then I was broken, now I'm movin on :)

Kinda like what happened in My Girl, right? His love one dying except now, there's no surprise kid.

It was beautiful by the way, sad but encouraging :)
Thanks.. Congrats

[lily_nee]

Yes, kinda like My Girl, and a bit of The Sixth Sense with Bruce Willis xD

I'm really happy that you enjoyed it.
Thanks for commenting and for your congratulations ^__^

[janipanda]

This was a sad story and you got me going that she was real.

Thanks for writing!

[lily_nee]

Glad you liked it!
Thanks for your comment~

[raene_9]

uwaaahhh! i really thought that she's alive & loved their sweet moments together but when Sho came to confront him that's when my tears started to fall while reading...somehow i knew then that she just Aiba's illusion and wow! that's really painful...but glad that he was able to move on...:)
this is lovely... ^)^

[lily_nee]

It's strange how I'm happy to make people cry with this story XD But if people cry, it means that they enjoyed, so I can be happy ^^"

You're the second person who told me that, about understanding when Sho arrived ^__^
I'm really happy you loved it!

Thank you for commenting~

[raene_9]

thanks also... ^_^
good luck on your next work...

[masaki82]

Wah~ it's so sad... I actually cried... not living in reality for the past 6 months... it must have been hard on him... thanks for sharing :)

[lily_nee]

Glad you like it! Sorry for making you cry ^^"

Thanks for commenting

[jmonogatari]

Ah I've read this several days ago! XD and as usual I forgot to leave my mark. I am sorry, having 2 accounts to juggle with is soo troublesome..

Anyways I really like your story here. Just the right amount of mystery/twist (please forgive the poor wording) and angst.
I love angst..

Thank you for writing and sharing!

[lily_nee]

Thanks a lot for your comment <3

Ok, now I'm curious to know what is your second account XD
Maybe you have already commented with it and I didn't know it was you xD

And this is totally out of the blue but I was wondering from where do you come from XD

[molskee]

Now you know :) the user info will tell you where I come from XD