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Rebuild What's Gone Unsteady (4/4)

Mar 29, 2009 05:23

Title: Rebuild What's Gone Unsteady
Author: LilyAyl
Rating: PG
Beta: attempt-unique (thank you!!!)
Notes: The title is from 'People Get Ready' by The Frames. I was lost and without title, but my beta saved me with a song. This story is set within a universe I am sharing with whatifisaidno.
Warnings: None.

People all get ready
'Cause we're coming ( Read more... )

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Comments 11

dustthouart March 29 2009, 04:23:39 UTC

Wow, I enjoyed this so much!

I'll come back and write more later, but I just want to say that I hope this will be continued. I enjoyed the plot and I want to see how everyone would interact in the actual school year. I felt like this was more like an appetizer. Please bring on the main course! :D

Edit: Also, do you have links to any other fic written in this universe? Or your fic in general? I don't see any links!

lilyayl March 29 2009, 06:12:21 UTC

Thank you very much. More will certainly be on the way. I'm glad you liked it.

This is the first fic of the universe. The person sharing with me has two short fics nearly ready for posting and I will link to them when they are done.

conuly March 29 2009, 04:55:17 UTC

I also hope this will be continued, please, please, please!

lilyayl March 29 2009, 06:12:54 UTC

There will certainly be more one-shots written in this universe.

I'm very happy you enjoyed the story.

laleia March 30 2009, 01:03:04 UTC

Hmmm ... I was wondering when Hannah was going to get a job -- but I felt like she would make a FAR better Head of House than Zachariah Smith.

Also, also, I totally called the "Tom Jamison" bit when I saw it in the earlier draft -- well, for a given value of "called it". I thought, "Hmm, Jamison is something I would name a Harry-in-disguise" which is almost the same thing as "calling it".

In conclusion, this is still a brilliant idea.

lilyayl March 30 2009, 09:09:32 UTC

Yes, Hannah definitely would be, but Neville needed Zach to accept and, at that time, needed a HoH. The students will learn as well.

:) Yeah, the name is a bit obvious and some characters will pick up on it while others won't.

I'm glad you liked. :)

fannyt March 30 2009, 20:01:37 UTC

Oh, wonderful. I loved all the little details of this (like Lavender's scar), and I love how you don't tell us everything. I'm going to be coming back to this, puzzling over little comments and sentences that make me think.

Your Pansy is wonderful, and all the rest of them, too. (And being almost criminally obsessed with Neville, I was of course happy to see him having a leading role. Pansy's description of him -- to Adrian -- was ace, too.)

lilyayl March 30 2009, 21:55:52 UTC

I'm very happy you enjoyed the story. Many of the unexplained comments will be used for the basis of additional fic in the future.

:) Yay for liking Pansy and Neville. They are both characters I like a lot and I am glad their depictions here work.

Thank you for reviewing.

BRILLIANT! anonymous May 18 2009, 05:28:30 UTC

I LOVE THIS!! This is great! I never even thought to think about life after the war and before the *gag* epilouge. I'm so happy! I really really hope you continue this, I can't wait to read more! I love your renditions of Neville and Pansy, they REALLY work- and how everyone ends up after the war, is very clever and believable. Please continue!