Week 4: Ultra Deep Field

[lilycobalt]

[Content note]Content note: References to rape.

Down, down, down we walked. If I allowed myself to, I could lose my sense of self among the descending throng before we ever reached the river. The farther we descended, the fewer differences distinguished the once-people surrounding me. All sizes and shapes melted and stretched into uniform gray rectangles that

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

I loved the feel of this, and the hints at the horror that earlier befell the character (so perfectly implied) and the idea of being made even a little bit free of it because of this journey.

[lilycobalt]

Thank you!

[phoenixsansfyr]

Beautiful imagery!

[lilycobalt]

Thanks!

[myrna_bird]

Nice mythological feel.

[lilycobalt]

Thanks!

[heeroluva]

This was really interesting. Well done.

[lilycobalt]

Thank you!

[roina_arwen]

This reminded me somewhat of the tale of Persephone. It was very well told, and very intriguing.

[lilycobalt]

Thank you! I did take my inspiration from the Greeks for this one, as Persephone has a way of following me around as I write.