LJ Idol-Week 22-Intersection Part II

[lilyinchains]

This week is another Intersection with the same topics as last week, "Playing the Odds" and an Open Topic. My partner this week is the extraordinarily talented basric  Check her piece out first, mine is part two.

Angels and Demons, we're not so different, you know? We both have a job to do, a place on Earth with certain tasks. Mine was on the

Comments

[basric]

Chilling. You did a wonderful job. The ending perfect.

[lilyinchains]

Thanks, partner. :)

[comedychick]

Wow. What an excellent intersection. I felt like you captured both spirits' voices really well.

[lilyinchains]

Thanks, I was trying to stay true to Basric's story.

[momebie]

I really like the way you worked this with your partner's entry.

[lilyinchains]

Thank you and thanks for the comment.

[nyxocity]

This was a very interesting take on basric's story. I found myself wondering during her story what had happened to the guardian spirit. I like what you did with her! :)

[lilyinchains]

I wasn't too cruel to her, lol? I wasn't sure where to go and actually did a rewrite on it.

[pixiebelle]

That was a nice intersection with your partner! I like how you took the role of the angel and made a story out of what was going on. Nicely told!

[lilyinchains]

Thanks so much!