LJ Idol:Week 23-Intersection (3 partners)

[lilyinchains]

        This is a three way intersection. My topic is "The Dark Side" and my partners and I chose this image as the intersection point. My partners this week are  serpentpixie  and yachiru . No need to read them in any specific order this time, but please do. They are excellent writers and you'll have fun reading them.

Pass the Ammunition
No Man is a Hero to his Valet

Comments

[hosticle_fifer]

Very cool. I liked the marriage of setting and personification here!

[i_17bingo]

I was, perhaps, the only color left in my world and it all started in this room, this once plush and luscious room.

I'm kind of amazed--both by lines like this, and the fact that you don't need context to appreciate the depth of hurt and loss.

[alephz]

What an awesome place to do an intersection from. And such a wonderful story to tell from that inspiration. Well done!

Love among the ruins.

[ellakite]

Deeply moving.

[joeymichaels]

This is a really clever idea for an intersection - using an image with the prompt to inspire a story. I also like the (as of reading your piece) mysterious nature of the two focal characters. Well done!