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Accept No Substitute, a FFVII fic

Nov 18, 2008 21:54

Title: Accept No Substitute
Author: lilymoon1Fandom: Final Fantasy VII, Crisis Core ( Read more... )

sephiroth/zack/cloud, ffvii, kinkfest, kink meme entries

Comments 29

etrix November 19 2008, 13:34:24 UTC

If I were Zack or Seph and I were still having problems accepting my new tentacles, this would definitely make it up to me.

The real toy doesn't seem half as appealing. -)

lilymoon1 November 20 2008, 00:29:15 UTC

Thanks! Nope. No more tentacle toy for Cloud. It's a one trick pony. Sephiroth and Zack, they have SKILLZ.

arlo_arleh November 19 2008, 13:57:46 UTC

I get back from a day at the city, decide to surf the internet for a bit before I go to bed... and I find this on my f-list. I'M SO HAPPY :D

*goes off to actually READ the fic now*

lilymoon1 November 20 2008, 00:30:33 UTC

Thanks! I was smothered in tentacles for *days* trying to get things the way I wanted.

karadin November 19 2008, 14:51:57 UTC

Oh very nice, thought the sex was very well done! Just two things

After a minute of panting recovery Cloud opened his eyes to see his superiors, Zack still holding his keys in one hand, watching him with hot eyes and lustful expressions.

You never mention Sephiroth in this sentance, perhaps state that they are in the doorway, or past it.

Then tentacle pulled out

Then the tentacle, etc.

Thanks again for the yummies!

lilymoon1 November 19 2008, 15:18:33 UTC

Thanks! Fixed both. Hmm, LJ is being wierd. Yours is the only comment that made it into my e-mail inbox.

thepiskie November 19 2008, 16:06:58 UTC

*BEEEEEP* Elf's brain is currently broken. Until we can find all the pieces, please leave a message and she'll get back to you later.

Hon' Tentacles is NOT one of the things I generally read. This? This was...wow.

lilymoon1 November 20 2008, 00:33:14 UTC

Uh oh, another man, er, *woman* down! Call in the medics!

Could there be a future conversion to tentacles perhaps? I know I was sucked right in. A year ago I would have said, oh hell no.

merytsetesh November 19 2008, 17:20:36 UTC

Damn you for making me look at a tentacle dildo. It was so weird I couldn't look away, and ended up exploring the rest of the site. Which makes for some weird anthro mutant dreams.

And as always, your work is so hot it's smoking and leaves me wanting sequels.

lilymoon1 November 20 2008, 00:38:43 UTC

Thank you! Sequels? Hmm, maybe.

I looked around the site, too. Um, horse cock, anyone? Nope, that one's two squicky for me.

merytsetesh November 20 2008, 14:39:30 UTC

I once read a fic where Zack took Cloud to a "chocobo show". THAT was certaintly...educational.

Did you see the fox cock? I thought that was the oddest. You know, besides the TENTACLE, which I think wins the award for freakiest shit ever.

lilymoon1 November 20 2008, 16:23:45 UTC

They were all certainly...interesting, to say the least. Otter? Alligator?

Somewhere I know someone has written porn for this. It's a given. lol

Chocobo show? Um, was Cloud 'in' the show?