I Suck At This Poetry Thing.....

[lilyoda]

Why do you send this message from so far away?
At the very least as it comes to a end.....
Never wanted it to be this hard
to say the three words that meant the
same to you as it does for me....

Every lasting dreams, waking in cold sweat...
screams on the edge of my breath
dreams of you of  me what it could have been
never thought it would end like

Comments

[cthulhuvong]

Very nice, very well written.

I think I need to take some pointers from you....

[lscruffyb]

Certainly much better than Jamie's. It's as if you're describing a dream.

[tanoshii66]

You're a lot better than I am and I even took a creative writing class and recieved an A in it. Didn't help any. >.>

My poetry is the worse.