Comments | lilyofgryfindor: My first fic.... everr!

lilyofgryfindor

My first fic.... everr!

Jul 18, 2007 17:20

The Betrayl.

It was just after she'd done it, torchured Frank and Alice Longbottom into insanity, that is. She was so proud of herself and she had to share the feeling with someone, Lionel had always been that someone. Rodolphus was with her when it happened and would only laugh when she confessed how giddy she was after each torcher, each killing. ( Read more... )

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chained_maid July 18 2007, 21:53:08 UTC

Wowee, pretty good for firsttime fic. So powerful.

lilyofgryfindor July 18 2007, 22:03:53 UTC

Thanks, I was kinda nervous posting it. :/

chained_maid July 18 2007, 22:05:09 UTC

Yeah, I was when I posted my first way back when. But you get used to it when people are nice and appreciate your work.

hunting_realism July 18 2007, 22:01:43 UTC

Ohhhh! That's so sad! I don't want Lionel to betray her!!

Great job for a first fic!

lilyofgryfindor July 18 2007, 22:04:56 UTC

Neither do i!!

Thank you. You would have done a better job at it though. :p

hunting_realism July 18 2007, 22:06:25 UTC

No, because I would have had to write from Lionel's POV and he would haven't felt the same.

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