She saw it every day

[lilyrite]

I wrote a little grey's anatomy fanfic:

Gemma gets the blame for all my fics, irrelevant of whether she actually watches this show or not

Comments

[miss_atom]

oh lily!! I love this story and I am so so sorry I never got around to beta-ing :( i'm a bad beta and coolege is sucking ALL MY LIFE.

And he wouldn’t care, because he’d be fantasizing about Meredith, and she’d be fantasizing about leaving him.

This is a brilliant line, you have a talent for leaving stories on such a beautifully poetic note.

:( I WILL definitley be online more soon. Once christmas break starts I will ahve very little to do all day except college work :( We should catch up asap on MSNO's XD

[lilyrite]

*snuggles you for being online at all*

we will catch up in the holidays *nods firmly* you will around more, i will be around more. i will have no life in the holidays, so much msn'ing will be done!

[stop_theworld]

omg, Lily! This is so amazing! I love that you posted a fic! And a Grey's fic! And an Addiefic! I wish you posted fic more!

Anyway, this was amazing. The whole theme of Addie watching Derek watching Meredith was really cool, and this is hard to explain, but I was reading it and I felt the presence of watching. Does that make any sense at all? I loved how you transitioned that one part from her missing Mark to her missing Derek. You're so good at angst and longing, you know. In your housefic too. I just thought of that. I love the comparison of hate and love versus indifference. And oh! the part with the joint credit card, that was awesome detail. When Mark came, that was so intense and the staring, omg. And the last paragraph just hit perfectly. OKAY I've rambled enough but really, Lily, this is amazing and I hope you write more fic soon! ♥

[lilyrite]

i have no way to compete with that comment so just a rather lovely thank u.

*snuggles*

[idio_cynic]

I read this off fanfiction.net before and loved it! It was just as great the second time around =)

[lilyrite]

thank you.
i just got lazy and forgot to actually post it on the fic community until tonight.

[stop_theworld]

Hi Lily!
This has nothing to do with the fic- although you already know how much I adore it- but this was your lastest entry, so...

OMGLAYOUT! I love it! The Addie header, of course, is lovely, and I like the colors, and everything! Just felt like telling you. XD

♥

[lilyrite]

thank you darling. haven't quite got round to finishing it yet. you know how it is, you have lots of work to do, so ofcourse you change your layout instead!

once its finished i promise i will actually post again! remember the days when a posted regularly. those were the days.