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Apr 27, 2007 13:59


A Second Chance

It happened on a gloomy day,
I weaved and lost control.
I thought I’d see the end of it,
But God refused to take my soul.

My fate was shattered on the spot,
I heard a sound and saw clear skies,
Like an endless murky dream,
I saw life pass before my eyes.

"Dear Lord", I shout, "please set me free,
for I have goals yet to achieve".
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doctoroohlala April 27 2007, 19:41:35 UTC
Absolutely beautiful.

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lilytoon April 27 2007, 20:01:50 UTC
Thank you so much for the comment, and for taking out the time to read the poem. :)

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doctoroohlala April 27 2007, 20:31:39 UTC
You're very welcome, and I enjoyed it very much. :]

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