Always crashing in the same car

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: Always crashing in the same car
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jon/Brendon/Ryan, Brendon/Ryan
Summary: There are things Jon wants; there are things Brendon wants; there are things Ryan wants.
Word Count: 4812
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: For blows_to_come. Thanks to notshybutsly for the beta, and for everyone who let me pester them about this one

Comments

[smotheredakiss]

Oh wow, that gave me chills. What did me in was Brendon making Ryan swallow, completely taking over Ryan's control of himself and their relationship. Maybe that didn't last, but god. That was spectacular.

And wow. The kissing over Jon's dick thing? Guh. Really hot.

[theaerosolkid]

I'm really glad you grabbed the subtext there!! I think that snowballing is kind of a weird act to begin with...just from the idea of shifting dynamics of power, you know?

[xobasket_casexo]

this was...amazingly done

it's just...omg

it's perfect

mmrs♥

[theaerosolkid]

Wow, thanks!!

[slashxmistress]

OH! OH! OH! Happy happy joy joy! There is more B/J/R !! That was soooooooo awesome. Dueling blow-jobs- one of my favorite kinks and the snowball-guh - so teh sex was HOT! but the complicated dynamics between them were even better. I love how you played up the yin/yang that is Ryan/Brendon, and Jon is almost caught in the middle.
And then the slight awkwardness at the end- I like that it wasn't too awkward- but it was real and a little uncomfortable.
I also like that you left it a little open ended. The tone feels like maybe Ryan's look wasn't a good one - but I could actually interpret that in different ways.
Stellar - memories for sure!

[theaerosolkid]

What a great comment! Thanks so much for taking the time, I really appreciate it.

[lets_go_to_rome]

it

they

gahhhhhh

*mumbles incoherently whilst eyes are as massive as with brendon's puppy-dog face*

that...perfect. completely and utterly, utterly perfect.

i....

GAH!

[theaerosolkid]

Aaww, thanks!

[theaerosolkid]

That was...pretty much exactly what I was aiming for, so, thanks.