a city named for us

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: a city named for us
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: R
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Brendon and Ryan and BrendonandRyan and still the bitch of living. Companion to that long in darkness pined.
Word Count: 2565
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Happy birthday to castoffstarter! Angst for you from me. Thanks a billion to notshybutsly for the beta ♥ Seriously. I could

Comments

[fly_meaway]

Oh this is just so absolutely beautiful. I love the flow in this so much, it's really captivating and works so well. And I love that this really continues from the other story instead of just being Ryan's pov of things. I really think this adds something to the overall story and you do it so well. Some amazing lines in here and some amazing scenes and just beautiful.

[theaerosolkid]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you took the time to comment, that means so much to me.

[pau494]

Your writing always leaves me speechless, so forgive the incoherency. Wow. I love the way this fits in all the right places with its companion fic, and I love the insight it gives to both Brendon and Ryan. Seeing Brendon through Ryan's eyes was amazing, and seeing Ryan's own journey through their relationship completed things, in a way. Am I making sense? It left me feeling hopeful, something that I don't feel very often, anyway. So THANK YOU. This was beautiful and heartbreaking, but you managed to put the pieces back together.

Also? OTP! THANK YOU FOR THE OTP!

[theaerosolkid]

Incoherency? Nah. You took the time to say something, which gets you tons of <3s from me, dude. I'm really glad that this touched you. ♥

OTPPPP. I WILL ENGINEER A COMEBACK. DO NOT DOUBT ME. IT WILL HAPPEN.

[pau494]

♥

I HAVE FAITH IN YOU, TELIS! YOU AND JZ ARE BRINGING THE OTP BACK. WITH SEXY DANCE MOVES AND EVERYTHING.

[nyquil_love]

I'm totally late for work now because I just had to read this.
I love it so much.
Everything you write is so amazing. I just love the way that you say things. Simple, but at the same time not even close to simple.
Sorry if this doesn't make sense, but I have to go.
I can't wait to read this again when I have more time.

[theaerosolkid]

Aaaw, thanks so much! I'm really glad you told me that you liked this :D I adore feedback of all types.

[melish]

You're so fucking..
What? Intense? Spot-on? Talented?

I feel like you're there.
I feel like you're Ryan's eyes, Ryan's mind, Ryan's ears. Lips. Nose.
What?
I feel like you're Ryan.

You don't need to use big words or elaborate phrases to get the message across, and..
This is just so fucking perfect.
The amen and hallelujah concept, also.
Just.

Fucking fantastic.

[theaerosolkid]

Wow, thank you so much!! I really appreciate this.

[lexicon]

Oh, oh ouch. Oh, my heart. You can always make me hurt so very good.

Everything you write is always so ridiculously good and seems like something that could truly be happening. You give Ryan and Brendon such depth and bring out a different characterization that really makes you think. This particular Brendon just really gets to me, and Ryan, oh Ryan.

[theaerosolkid]

Thank you so much! I love writing those two little wretches, seriously. They're just so interesting, and it's always great to hear that my characterization is going well with other people's perceptions of the people.