Cave of Wonders

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: Cave of Wonders
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Panic! At the Disco GSF
Summary: Jon Walker keeps hearing about these fabulous orgies.
Word Count: 3341
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: For the bandslashmania (Turning) Tricks or Treats Fic Exchange, for dsudis!! I hope you like it :D and Happy Halloween!! Thanks to notshybutsly and castoffstarter for their amazing beta help,

Comments

[sinsense]

This was great - the fast shift into PORN was awesome. I really like the text messages, much like some other commenters; they really were absurdly hilarious, and just made this a giddy experience to read. Thanks for writing this, and posting it.

[theaerosolkid]

Thank you! It was some work to get done, so I'm glad the flow worked for you.

[dsudis]

So very very late to my own gift-fic, but yaaaaaaaay, this is awesome! Hilarious (oh JON, talking to ZACK) and hot (oh Jonnnnnnnn, and Ryan, and guh) and all good things. Thank you again, so very much!!

[theaerosolkid]

I'm really glad you like it :D Happy Halloween!!

[airgiodslv]

I cannot even express how much I love you right now. The characters in this were brilliant, every single one of them, from Panic! right down to Zack and TAI and Pete, I loved your narrator's voice and the style of your writing, descriptive but also sharp and funny.

There were so many lines in this that had me literally clapping my hand over my mouth laughing, I can't count them all, but it started here - "You're a skeptical bastard and you have bad taste in pizza," William says. - and may have climaxed right around here - "I'd lose my balance if I lost my ass," Brendon says. - when I fell hardcore in love with Brendon and never looked back.

I love them all, though, seriously, Ryan and Spencer are perfect and Pete is hysterical and I adore your William (Hahaahahahahhhaha sucks to be ypuuu. had me in stitches again) and Jon is such a normal guy, with a really great inner monologue. I loved his scenes with Zack. And the way I could never be sure if they were really having sex or not for most of the story was absolutely brilliant, the

[theaerosolkid]

Hahaha, great! Writing TAI and Pete is always a nailbiting experience for me, primarily because they are not Panic! At the Disco and therefore don't really click too well in my head.

Anyway, thanks so much!! :D

[bayleaf]

Hilarious and hot, my favorite combination! This was just an awesome story. Great pacing. I especially loved Jon commiserating with Zack (poor Zack!) and all the little 'good luck with your new venture, here's a sex-themed item for your enjoyment' gifts at the beginning.

[theaerosolkid]

\o/ Thanks! Jon's friends are good buddies, yo, they take care of him.

[exsequar]

This is pretty much fan-fucking-tabulous :D I love the light-hearted yet fiercely sexy feel of the whole thing. Oh, yum!

This nearly made me spit out my tea: "Hi," Jon says brightly. "Wrong room?" And Zack! OH ZACK! So long-suffering! <3

And Pete's final text is just perrrrfect. HEEHEE. You win, baby. You absolutely win. :D

[theaerosolkid]

Oooh, fiercely sexy. Best compliment ever y/y? I THINK SO.

Thanks, buddy :D