We'll shoot the generals on our own side

Apr 30, 2008 01:12

Title: We'll shoot the generals on our own side
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Brendon/Audrey
Summary: The universe tends towards disorder.
Word Count: 995
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Thanks to withoutmaps for the beta.

i'm supposed to be a seasoned fighter (this feels like my first hit). )

brendon/audrey, pg-13

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theaerosolkid May 4 2008, 09:39:35 UTC
Thank you so much! In truth, I am completely not an Audrey fan at all, but I can recognize that there's a "might-have-been" or a "maybe" buried in her, if you get what I mean.

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pau494 April 30 2008, 14:56:56 UTC
I think I read every line about three times, taking it all in. I'm kinda speechless over here. The grasp you have on them, on Brendon and Audrey, even Ryan, it's amazing. I loved every single word and it broke my heart a little and I don't even know why. I guess it's because every time you write, it makes me feel. Thank you!

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theaerosolkid May 4 2008, 09:39:52 UTC
Thank you, squishy!! <333

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theaerosolkid May 4 2008, 09:40:32 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it.

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withoutmaps April 30 2008, 18:49:37 UTC
I still really, really love this. This line: "What's love got to do with it, baby?" Brendon asks and lets Ryan tuck him into bed. makes me want to coo at Brendon and oh my god, the way you describe Audrey. I'm going to continue to be in love with this story forever. ♥!

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theaerosolkid May 4 2008, 09:40:53 UTC
Thank you so much for helping me out, hon!! I'm still really pleased that you like it. :D

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nightlark May 1 2008, 00:46:11 UTC
this is pretty phenomenal. it's all so simple but it's easy to fill in the blanks in between. i adore this.

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theaerosolkid May 4 2008, 09:41:08 UTC
Thank you so much!!

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