[fic] What a chance - Reita/Ruki - 6

May 17, 2009 16:51

Title: What a chance
Chapters: 6/?
Author: Read more... )

multichap, the gazette, chaptered: what a chance, fic, reitaxruki

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limaccia_san May 18 2009, 17:26:27 UTC
Ah I think Ruki won't mind having Rei under his bed *wiggles eyebrows*.

So I'd write shorter chap?? *criticism whore* This chap had only two scenes, so I didn't want to separate them, but it turned out long actually.. Well, shorter chap then *nods* I'll try ^O^/

Thank you for telling me your opinion, I'm sure it'll be useful *grabs*
Keep reading ^O^/

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limaccia_san May 19 2009, 16:12:38 UTC
Aaaaah I get it, you mean the paragraphs!!
Yeah, you are right, they are too long D: I'd put more empty rows. I'll pay attention to it next time U_U

Thank you ^O^/

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beautifool_ish May 19 2009, 03:15:41 UTC
I just started reading this fic and im so in love with it now~ *_* i read all the chapters so far and this one (chap. 6) was by far my favorite one so far~! ^///^ its so cute and its so hot when ruki and reita were on the bed... wow... o////o
youre a good writer and i love how adorable youve made their lil romance~ so perfect~ >///<
i will keep reading and i hope you keep updating this~! <3

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limaccia_san May 19 2009, 16:20:27 UTC
You red it all together?? wow O_O I'm so happy you like it >//<
Aaawww thank you T0T *grabs*
Yeah, keep reading please I'll upload next chap as soon as I can ^O^/
Thank you so much for supporting me çoç

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fairydrop May 20 2009, 21:40:29 UTC
And I love you!

Thank you!

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limaccia_san June 26 2009, 22:50:18 UTC
Oh I just noticed your last comment ç_ç.. Sank you.. I'm so happy you like this *hugs*.
Thank you so much for commenting T0T

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k_imie September 27 2009, 20:57:53 UTC
WOW, I can't believe it was your first attempt to writte some smut o_o
Gosh, you're so good at this! :o

Well, about the chap, I can feel the frustration of both in the Taka kun's bedroom scene.
Bad time to call, really DD:

Reirei's mother is such a ignorant person. She pisses me off =__='

BUUT, aah, the last lines was so sweet with all the "I'm in love with you" stuff.
If I were Taka kun, I certanly would melt and be paralyzed, unable to anwser something coherent /retarded

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limaccia_san September 29 2009, 15:29:30 UTC
*blushes* thank u T0T *glomps*

Yeah >_> baaaaad bad timing XD

Yeah D:< she's irritant, really *glares at her*

XD yeah, I know what u mean *nods* having someone like Rei that looks at you THAT way *melts just thinking about it*

Thank u ç_ç

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