Comments | limnological: Stay

limnological

Stay

Dec 03, 2013 02:49

Title: Stay
Author: limnological
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: JeTi
Description: Now I’m all messed up, sick and tired of wondering where you’re leaving your make-up and whose life you’re making worthwhile.

( Rinse and repeat )

snsd, tiffany hwang, jessica jung, jeti

Comments 8

jorgenzen December 3 2013, 09:50:56 UTC

SPOT. SPOT.

This was a nice and beautiful read. All the prose are ♥.
Keep on writing angst. :P Spread the pain like a wildfire.

SPOT kaorujin December 3 2013, 14:36:12 UTC

GOOD MORNING. I SHOULD BE GETTING READY FOR SCHOOL BUT I DECIDED TO ACCESS FANFICTION OF MY SCHOOL ISSUED NETBOOK THAT IS PROBABLY MONITORED JUST TO SECURE A SPOT. I WILL BE BACK WILL A LONG, LONG COMMENT. SPOT SECURED OVER AND OUT.

Re: SPOT kaorujin December 4 2013, 04:52:05 UTC

Okie due to popular demand I am here to comment. Rinse and repeat makes me think of either a) Jessica trying to wash Tiffany out of her hair or b) mouth wash because Tiffany leaves a sour taste in Jessica's mouth the morning after. All of the metaphors and similes and imagery @_@

"But when you whispered, “I want your fingerprints on me. Imprint them onto my skin,” I was pushed beyond the point of no return."

^ THIS LINE OMFG

The way you incorporated the cafe scene A++++++++++

“I never really loved her anyway.”

^dead.dead.dead.dead.dead.and gone.

"Empty sheets, empty hearts, empty lives.

“Stay.” I whisper quietly as you leave the bed.

But you cannot hear me because you were never listening in the first place."

^I think this was my favorite part of the whole fic. And that was really hard to decide because everything is so great

LIM I'M SO PROUD OF YOUR FIRST ANGST. I'M SO SORRY YOU'RE STARVING RIGHT NOW. I WOULD TREAT YOU TO A BUFFET IF I COULD ALAS DISTANCE TT A TT

j2air December 3 2013, 17:41:32 UTC

woahh, limmy the fluffy writer wrote angst. :o
btw, this is nicely done to break hearts. <

parachuterawr December 3 2013, 20:39:29 UTC

Oh man, what's with the angst today? Hahaha

Ugh. Tegan and Sara. Those two are perf.

And this piece is just heartbreakingly beautiful.

Thanks for sharing this! :)

yeah5501 December 4 2013, 00:13:13 UTC

wow. i did not expect an angst fic from you...and I LOVE IT!
haha..
i have been deprived of angst fics for a very long time and it's very disappointing to not see a good angst fic around so i'm very thankful for this^^

^that comes from someone who prefers angst over any other genre