Comments | linckia_blue: Fic: 4 Times Sam Didn't Get it and 1 Time He Did

linckia_blue

Fic: 4 Times Sam Didn't Get it and 1 Time He Did

Feb 21, 2010 10:56

Umm…hello. I am new. I just marathoned season five and read fic until it was coming out my ears and I felt I should contribute. Mainly I did a Five Times sort of fic to ease myself in with a nice stable format. And then I couldn’t think of a fifth time x_o [/nervous ( Read more... )

fic, dean/castiel

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linckia_blue February 21 2010, 16:56:12 UTC

Thank you so much for the comment :D

anonymous February 21 2010, 13:51:33 UTC

I guess it's kind of fitting that I'm the first to comment here, as it's your first time posting a fiction, and I've been lurking reading here for a while, but never commented on anything yet....
Well I'll keep it short, sweet and honest - it was gorgeous, and I loved it. You nervous little kitty is really cute, but trust me...you don't have anything to be nervous about!

linckia_blue February 21 2010, 16:57:11 UTC

Hurrah for mutual de-lurking! Thank you for the comment <3

sycophantastic February 21 2010, 13:52:11 UTC

I - LOVE - THIS - SO - MUCH!

I think I almost choked on my own laughter when I got to this part - “What has happened here?” Castiel says. His voice is so monotone and stilted he sounds like a computer. Or maybe like what Castiel would sound like trying to act. “Oh no,” Castiel says, as if scripted, “Why was Dean tied to the bed?”.

Oh... my god... that is the best EVER. Naked Castiel attempting to deliver "shocked" lines given to him by his sexed up secret hunter boyfriend. You win at LIFE for writing this!

Don't be nervous, hon. In addition to being screamingly funny, you also write beautiful prose like this - It’s late and the sky has a summer’s hot velvet clarity. The stars look like they’ve been painted thickly over the indigo night. He doesn’t think he’s seen a sky like that since he was ten years old, and still waiting for everything, for love, for happiness, for pain, for a purpose.That was gorgeous. You write really quite well. In fact I'd like to see more stories from you... as soon as possible, if you please ( ... )

linckia_blue February 21 2010, 16:59:10 UTC

Thank you so much for the comment and welcome. Many fears have been assuaged :D

juanitatequila February 21 2010, 21:44:25 UTC

I just love how everything flowed so naturally!!!

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linckia_blue February 21 2010, 17:02:07 UTC

Thank you so much <3 <3 I figure Sam wouldn't notice these things not for lack of evidence but because he Would Not expect it...

anonymous February 21 2010, 13:54:31 UTC

well, I thought I was going to be first...must've just been beaten to it!