fic: never so safe as i am with you

Aug 24, 2010 12:11

Title: never so safe as i am with you
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: approx. 6,500
Disclaimer: I do not claim profit or ownership of any recognizable plots/characters.
Summary: Arthur has better subconscious security than anyone in the world. It’s notoriously impossible to steal a secret from him. Unless, of course, you’re Eames.

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arthur/eames, fic

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softsirens August 24 2010, 15:06:00 UTC
oh, wow. i really loved this. ♥

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neierathima August 24 2010, 15:07:21 UTC
oh this is just utterly fantastic. everything is spot on.

but this:

The thing that only professionals can do, like Arthur and Cobb and, best of all, Eames - because he’s a forger -- is create an experience.

The only way to trick people into believing something exists when it can’t is that tangible spill of emotion that makes a dream more vivid than real life itself. Arthur picks a feeling from somewhere deep inside himself, of catching up to something impossible, pride and awe and the bittersweet note of finding the end of a beautiful thing. He fixes it to the last inch of the bridge in the space right between stone and sky.

is my absolutely favorite.

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linckia_blue August 24 2010, 20:58:08 UTC
thank you <3

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chrisrichfan August 24 2010, 15:12:13 UTC
This...
is just one word: BREATHTAKING.
Every scene, every word just leave me hanging and wanting more, and you described every single scene with such detail it just plays out in my mind naturally without much imagination at all, your play of words do that brilliantly for me.
And I have to say, this is hands down, the MOST stunning visuals in a fanfiction I've ever read. I don't know where you got all your fantastic ideas from, but all the landscapes and scenery you described are just stunning. Plain stunning.
That plus your take on creating dreams and how to forge and the subconscious security flaws and all those brilliant concepts just all adds up beautifully!!

Such a pleasant read, great job! I'm memming this to keep forever, because this is just gorgeous. Thank you for sharing. :)

Also, as a last note, I'd watch this if it were to be a movie! <3

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linckia_blue August 24 2010, 17:28:24 UTC
:D Thanks for the absolutely lovely comment!

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chrisrichfan August 25 2010, 02:21:31 UTC
I totally pimp the hell out of this fic to everyone, just so you know. :D

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jenna_marianne August 24 2010, 15:14:36 UTC
Lovely...great imagery, especially the birds, and Arthur's mall, and Eames' casino, and the cliff and sea and sky and bridge...and basically everything (oh, and the *panther*)!

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taconaco August 24 2010, 16:31:11 UTC
This is just...beautiful. Beautiful imagery, beautiful in the way they come together in such a subtle way. I love it so, so much <3. Keep producing awesomeness!

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