Comments | lindentree: True Grit - "With No Lodestar In Sight", Mattie/LaBoeuf, T

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True Grit - "With No Lodestar In Sight", Mattie/LaBoeuf, T

Dec 07, 2011 18:34

Title: With No Lodestar In Sight - 11/?
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series: with no lodestar in sight, pairing: mattie/laboeuf, fic: mine, true grit

Comments 11

rj_anderson December 8 2011, 00:45:20 UTC

*sigh*

That was lovely and perfect. Which means, of course, that now I am jittery with terror that you're going to kill off LaBoeuf in the next chapter and this isn't going to be an AU after all. *sob*

lindentree December 10 2011, 22:01:10 UTC

I probably shouldn't ruin your suspense, but I'm going to anyway. I promise no one dies! Not even I am so cruel that I could bump one of them off. Beyond that, I can't say, but I won't keep you in suspense for long. :) Thanks for reading and commenting!

rj_anderson December 11 2011, 01:10:23 UTC

You have taken a great weight off my mind. Phew! I can carry on now. :D

lotus0kid December 8 2011, 01:49:49 UTC

Mmm, that was wonderfully romantic, while being couched in Mattie's ironclad pragmatism. I'm with rj_anderson, though, I can't quite shake the fear that something Not Good might happen...

lindentree December 10 2011, 22:04:02 UTC

Obviously I can't say much about what's going to happen, so I'll just have to let you stew. Sorry! Glad to hear you enjoyed this chapter, though. Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

theonlytwin December 8 2011, 06:04:20 UTC

how do you even do that? uh these kids and their formal yet highly intimate romance and COMBS that she wants to keep her EYES ON it's all too heartbreaking.

lindentree December 10 2011, 22:06:39 UTC

Thank you! :) Glad you're enjoying it.

edoran December 8 2011, 10:14:59 UTC

Oh, man, you had me giggling and blushing like a school girl! Love the understated way that you’ve written both of them. I love their subtle but obviously strong feelings & the way in which they’ve come to acknowledge and voice them.

Fantastic, really, fantastic. You always manage to make me want to watch the movie again, even though I wasn’t the *biggest* fan to start with. Goes to show, I think your writing style and storyline are really great.

I’m not sure if this is the last chapter, but I really hope not!!!... I never want this to end! :D

lindentree December 10 2011, 22:16:04 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm delighted to know you're enjoying it so much. :)

This is definitely not the last chapter. There's one more for sure, so don't worry! :)

jebbypal December 8 2011, 14:06:44 UTC

lovely. Great job with Mattie's reasoning and discovery of her feelings. Loved the exchange of gifts.

lindentree December 10 2011, 22:16:20 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)