"Bring Me to Life" Chapter 11~Road to Hell

[lindseyfair]

Or read it HERE at ff.net

Title: Bring Me to Life

Author: Lindseyfair

Characters/Pairings: Edward/Bella mostly, some Alice/Jasper, some Emmett/Rosalie

Rating: Overall M for Mature, will designate chapters with more graphic content.

Category: Hurt/Comfort, Romance

Spoilers: None really, would be nice if you've at least read “Twilight” to get the basic

Comments

[sallyox]

Well how do you expect me to sleep after that?!

form taylor

[anonymous]

okay so i just like love your stories to death. check the site every day just to see or read your amsazing stories so keep up the good work cant wait to see wat happens next.thanxs

[hysteria_09]

Umm....WOW!

That chapter was fantastic. I'm sad about the hair but happy to know he's going to get it back =].

And I think it should be from Jasper's POV I think he would give more of an insight into the entire family, while Carlisle may not be as in-touch with his children =]

[hayley_cullen]

HOLY HALE!
OME! WHAT A CHAPTER!!!

OME, Anne! You total bitch!! GRRR! I hate you!! When we found out that Anne knew about this the whole time, I screamed so much! I wanted to wring her neck! Gah!

And now Anne is using Edward AND Bella...What a sick bitch! I don't even want to go on about Demetri, because there wouldn't be enough rude words in the English, french, or spanish language for him!

Oh gosh, the way they shackled Edward and Bella to seperate beds, far enough so they couldn't touch, that was sooo sad!

They dyed Edwards hair? Oh no they did-n't! *Head wiggle*
And Bella's?? Gah! I hope they do get their normal hair back!

And now Edward and Bella are moving to a different house, and they were sooo close to being found, that was horrible!

I would like it to be in Carlisle's POV, just because we don't normally get to listen to his version, so it would be interesting. Also, whilst Carlisle would be caring about his whole family, Jasper would care most about Alice.

Anyways, great chapter!

[x_babyalison_x]

umm well its the first chapter i didnt really like i think my main reasons were Demetri and Anne but i cant wait for the next chapter which should be told by Jasper because he seems the right person in touch with his emotions so i think he would be able to control his emotions in order to tell the story