"The Best Medicine"

Jun 06, 2013 22:22

Eyes on the electronic tablet in front of her, Jillian did the math in her head.  “So, you’ve been here for… six months now ( Read more... )

the nurse left work at five o'clock

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bahia June 7 2013, 11:20:28 UTC
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I love how it took a while for the reality of the world to become clear and your imagery was great. I could read a whole book about Jillian Nightingale.

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adora_avis June 11 2013, 07:48:06 UTC
This was a great read, very imaginative. I love the world you've set up here. And the contrast in characterization between Wesley and Jullian was stark and powerful. Nice job!

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