Comments | linkinwolf: Haiku? WTF?

linkinwolf

Aug 14, 2006 23:29

Work, how I hate thee.
I do hate you very much.
My body hurts lots.

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he_and_his_cat August 16 2006, 06:11:43 UTC

the bottom verse there
has five plus one syllables
haikus have just five

[warrrk!]

he_and_his_cat August 16 2006, 14:09:31 UTC

middle verse as well
has an extra syllable
blame the body aches

linkinwolf August 16 2006, 15:57:00 UTC

Aww, I suck!

I'll fix it, I will!

xstratedgex August 16 2006, 18:58:41 UTC

gotta watch out for the haiku police

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