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How I Met Your Mother - III

Nov 22, 2010 23:16

Title: How I Met Your Mother
Author: linlawless
Rating: T
Word Count (This chapter ): 2014
Prompt: I used two, though I didn’t stay faithful to either: (1) Hermione and Snape have a 10th year anniversary. But it does not mark a happy day. It is a day both (or one) or them want to forget. Their story of coming together is not the kind one would tell one's ( Read more... )

celebrate sshg fic

Comments 24

infinite_whimsy December 5 2010, 16:45:46 UTC

Best bad-sex-scene ever. Poor Severus. So few people understand that buttons plus horrid hair equals pain.

linlawless December 5 2010, 17:40:05 UTC

Bad-sex is SO much fun to write! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

madeleone December 5 2010, 20:44:22 UTC

Oh, my, the poor dears, what a comedy of errors. LOL! I loved Severus strategy for the rule breakers: You will lose ten points from Slytherin and earn a day of detention with Mr. Filch for each and every minute this takes, beginning now.

linlawless December 5 2010, 21:35:43 UTC

Gotta figure that getting interrupted just when things seemed to be taking a turn for the better would leave him *seriously* displeased, and who better to take it out on?! This chapter was ridiculously fun to write :)

missmiah December 6 2010, 02:25:42 UTC

One of the best bad sex scenes I've ever read.

linlawless December 6 2010, 02:35:12 UTC

LOL, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

scatteredlogic December 6 2010, 04:01:17 UTC

LOL - You know, it was a "bad" sex scene, but it was a lot more realistic than the majority of the "perfect" sex scenes that we've all written. ~grin~

"Your misbehavior has pulled me away from my wife in the middle of the night. You will lose ten points from Slytherin and earn a day of detention with Mr. Filch for each and every minute this takes, beginning now."

I laughed out loud at this. I can absolutely see him being just that irritated and impatient considering the circumstances. ~applause~

linlawless December 6 2010, 04:04:07 UTC

I have to say, I had more fun writing that sex scene than any I've ever written! :D Glad you liked the punishment -- it was fun to imagine just how he'd express that level of displeasure. :)

morethansirius December 6 2010, 04:24:59 UTC

“Whatever made you think of that fiasco?”

Yep, all the marking of an unmitigated disaster! Although I think Minerva's testimony and the resulting deduction of points from Slytherin should go a long way towards supporting their true marriage claims. Poor Severus. He never gets a lucky break, does he?!?!

~Races off to see if the morning was any better.~

linlawless December 6 2010, 04:26:26 UTC

LOL, yep, poor Severus. Sigh. ;)

Thanks for commenting!