Statement of Purpose (Edited from yesterday)

Jan 06, 2011 20:59

SO.....

Anyone wanna proofread my SOP for MFA programs? If so -->HERE<--

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FWIW revelsofthedead January 7 2011, 14:05:03 UTC
Okay, so I have never written an artists statement.

However.

It seems to me that this is a critque, with some biography pitched in as explanation. That its what is, rather than what will be. It isn;t until the end that I think you hit the beginning..

What does our memory “protect” us from so that we can live our every day lives? What happens when someone remembers, when artwork is destroyed, or perhaps has a metamorphosis and challenges our preconception of what was and is? -- start the work here. And if you need to later, get into bio and history.

One of my friends is an artist in Potsdam, check her site for her statement.. http://www.amyswartele.com/

I hope this helps rather than frustrates!

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Re: FWIW linseedlindslee January 7 2011, 14:25:20 UTC
I did an edit this morning thanks to an artist friend of mine. Is that better?

Thanks :)

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Re: FWIW linseedlindslee January 7 2011, 14:27:00 UTC
Your friend has an artist statement which is different from an SOP, yet somewhat the same....

Weird though. I will post mine here as well.

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