Episode 4 - 05:27

[linsetsu]

Title: Episode 4 - 05:27
Fandom: Gundam 00
Genre and Rating: General - PG
Summary: the infamous kiss scene in episode 4
Disclaimer: I do not own Gundam 00, nor any of its characters.

uhm... animegoil and dark_malignity convinced me to take up the idea of writing a series of drabbles based on scenes from each episode. Of course, with the ghost ^_^
So, here's the second one.

Comments

[carameltrap]

You captured Lyle perfectly. I love it because you wrote him as himself and not as another Lockon and not as some scum or jerk.

Poor baby. He'll always be in his big brother's shadow, isn't he? ;_;

[linsetsu]

Thank you!! I don't get where the idea is coming from that Lyle's some sort of jerk... I certainly don't see him that way. I mean, he's suddenly plunged into a group of people who already know each other pretty well. Of course he'll be testing the water, pushing to see how far he can be granted leeway and trying to figure out what everyone already knows. *shrugs*

It makes him interesting. He's certainly not like his brother, and give me a moment to fangirl Miki Shinichiro for making such a huuuuge contrast between Neil and Lyle. *^_^* I wish there would be a scene where Miki-san will have to voice both of them in one conversation. I would die from sheer happiness.

But I don't believe he'll always in his brother's shadows. I mean, Neil's shadow can only reach so far, since he's gone. I think he'll catch up ^_^
(sorry, I rambled)

[carameltrap]

Yeah, he's still trying to adjust himself with everyone and it doesn't help that he's identical to his brother in looks that they still look at him as Lockon. I think he's sort of a little more serious, maybe but all we saw were the playful teasing and that kiss which was mean but it did drove a point home to Feldt.

And now I'm rambling. ^^;

[linsetsu]

Yep, the kiss certainly made its point. Poor Feldt though... Looks can really deceive.

And no, that's not called rambling ^_^

[efeitokaminari]

Ohhh, the way you wrote and built the character's emotions were so great. I really liked it. Congratulations.

[linsetsu]

thank you thank you!! ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it!

[animegoil]

Acccck, SO FRICKIN COOL. yeah. I loved Lockon's little comments on Lyle, and just... Lol's at some of them, and then ouch at others. Aw, I just realized that I miss having Lockon around. Like, his fun personality and just overall love factor :( But yeah, great job with this ^_^ I hope you keep it up throughout the series. Lockon's comments on Neil's actions were the best <3

[linsetsu]

"Lockon's comments on Neil's actions were the best"

You mean Neil's comments on Lockon's actions? ^^

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!! You made it possible, remember!! I miss him too~! I am patiently waiting for flashbacks...although they'll probably be serious ones...*sniff*

And yes, I definitely will try to keep this up for the rest of the series! It's great fun writing them!! Thanks for your support!

[animegoil]

Well, I tend to refer to Neil as Lockon, but either way I messed up cause then I should have said Lockon's comments on Lyle's actions XD

<3 Yeah, this is awesome, I'm looking forward to the rest!

[linsetsu]

lol, it's all very confusing with both Neil and Lyle being Lockon.
Anyways, Thanks! You update your DGM fic too! Thanks for your reply, by the way ^_^

[dark_malignity]

his posture and movements displaying nothing more than an easygoing attitude. But there was that tension in his shoulders, rigid below the surface, the tension that had never eased since first being confronted by Setsuna.

“I guess I’m still not up to Nii-san’s level,” Lockon lamented, running a hand through his hair.

He cracked a smile fondly. You will be soon. And then you’ll surpass me someday. Like you always have. ARRRGH! WINNNNuh! i keep trying to defend lyle but pple just dont get it. no, he is NOT confident, he's NOT arrogant, and he might be a bit of a bastard, but that's cos he's blinking insecure! gah! why other pple cant see that tension u so beautifully pointed out is beyond me. (and no, i'm not a lyle fan, but i do have a younger bro i love and adore, and i know its not easy being the-younger-to-a-scuccessful-and-loved-elder, poor thing

[linsetsu]

=^__^= I'm so glad you liked it

[dark_malignity]

oh, i must have misherd. cos he was calling him nii-san all the way, except for that one bit which sounded like nii-sama, LOL!

okay, must rewatch!! (still, even it IS just mishearing, it might be interesting to have neil mishear and then realised his mishearing?)

preview as in SEASON preview, not episode, sorry for the mix-up. anyway, in case u really didnt have the sason preview: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ab8Wqg7jUFY

:D

[linsetsu]

OMG!!! That trailer is HILARIOUS! I so missed it. WHY?!

*rolls away on the floor laughing and crying*

[kheradihr]

Oh wow. I love that you put Neil there, watching everything. It breaks my heart, but its still well written.

You also did well characterizing them both.

[linsetsu]

Thank you!! ^_^ It kind of lightens my week sticking Neil into these scenes and portraying his thoughts and reactions to season 2, especially Lyle. ^^;

[kheradihr]

How you wrote it makes me wonder if Lockon's ghost is somewhere on Ptolemy watching everyone. And if he is there, he's probably thinking the things you wrote.

[linsetsu]

hehe. I'd love to write about his ghost watching everyone, but that would be too time consuming...Not to mention, I fear it'll start to get repetitive. But if there's a really interesting scene in the future episodes, I may rethink it ^^;