Of Realisations and Living after them

Oct 30, 2008 00:47

Title: Of Realisations and Living after them
Author: LinSetsu
Fandom: Gundam 00
Genre: General
Characters: Lockon Stratos, Lyle Dylandy, Neil Dylandy
Rating: PG-13 (for some swearing)
Warnings/kinks: no kinks. AU. Spoilers for those of you who have not yet seen the latest episodes of Season 2.
Summary: Part 5 of the AU series "Of Living".
Disclaimer: I ( Read more... )

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orion_nightbane October 30 2008, 00:53:49 UTC
O_O!!!!!!!!!! the angst~~ somehow my brain is just pointing to twincest ._. but ANYWAY! this was awesome! i loved the way Neil asked Setsuna if he remembered to drink his milk. :) and this is awesome! don't stop! :P

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linsetsu October 30 2008, 11:07:06 UTC
hm...angst...? Yeah, maybe... I hadn't intended to write angst, but I guess it came out like that. ^^; And as much as I admore any sort of twincest between these two characters, I think it's more just sibling affection (although I won't stop you from your imaginations XD).

Yay! You got the milk part! I didn't think I needed to add the 'milk', but was still unsure whether the readers would get the gist of it. I'm glad you did!

Thanks for your lovely comment! And I hope you continue to enjoy it! ^_^

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orion_nightbane October 30 2008, 12:47:23 UTC
ahahahahahha yeah... my brain got kinda carried away i guess XD even so, sibling affection is pwnsome enough :D XD

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linsetsu October 30 2008, 14:46:18 UTC
Definitely!! Carried away brains coming up with the best ideas ^_^

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animegoil October 30 2008, 01:27:34 UTC
OMG. OMG. Daaaaaaaaaaamnm, that was awesome. Great job tweaking this to keep the suspense as long as possible ^_^ I'm loving the psychological implications of this not being the Lockon they all knew. <3 <3 Can't wait for more!

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linsetsu October 30 2008, 11:09:30 UTC
whee! ^_^ Thanks!! It was kind of hard writing Neil like that, but I think it came out alright. Poor Lyle is suffering from the shock of the difference between the Neil in his memories and the Neil in front of him. >.<

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mangaka_chan October 30 2008, 02:11:25 UTC
Wow. Damn, that was well written. XD I can see the whole thing play out in my head. And is Neil dead at the end of this chapter? I think that's what's being implied, or he might be unconscious again, but I can't be 100% sure. In any case, great job and I hope you'll write an epilogue! ;D

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linsetsu October 30 2008, 11:14:51 UTC
Thank you!
haha, I did leave it kind of vague, but no, Neil is not dead. Just...out of it...again. ^^; And yes, there'll be one last part, and then an epilogue (I think)

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mangaka_chan October 31 2008, 07:06:22 UTC
Oh~ That's great, because I'm curious how Neil feels about his brother taking over his role as Lockon and what he thinks about his life now that he's an amputee. God, there's so much that can be done and explored with this story, I'm really looking forward to it. XD

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linsetsu October 31 2008, 17:55:41 UTC
Really, I wouldn't write an AU in which Neil lives just to kill him off 5 parts into it ^^;
Yep, some of those points will be mentioned in the next part. ^_^

Thanks for your support!

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carameltrap October 30 2008, 02:27:42 UTC
OMG, that was so good. Keep this up and I might fall to pieces. I love it.

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fencergirl07 October 30 2008, 04:34:30 UTC
This series is really good~
I was hoping for another installment today haha.
I checked a few times and then BAM~

Thanks! Keep up the good work.

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linsetsu October 30 2008, 11:28:18 UTC
haha! Thanks!! Hope you continue to enjoy it!!

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linsetsu October 30 2008, 11:27:26 UTC
Uhoh...expectations, expectations..what should I do~?? x_x

But thanks! I'm glad your liking it so far! (I'll do my best not to disappoint you!)

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thelansera October 30 2008, 09:29:16 UTC
YEEEEEES, this is wonderful!
Thank you so much for writing it!!

For some strange reason, I LOL'd when I read this line:
He swore a third time in his head, but it was by far, the loudest and crudest.
HAHAHA Lyle XD.

And Neil is GOOD, not only can he use the monitor against Lyle, he can also do some damages even though he's only half crippled!

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thelansera October 30 2008, 11:04:38 UTC
linsetsu, the fanart "I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT THAT IS" is done XD. Before I disgrace myself any further, I send the link to that thing in the PM :).

And yeah I can't draw kids.
*shakes head*

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linsetsu October 30 2008, 11:33:09 UTC
(insert PM reply contents in here...aka: SQUEAL SQUEAL OMG OMG) *is in heaven* Can I post it on the 00 comm? Or will you?! People have GOT to see it!! They are soo missing out on it! I LOOOOOVE it!!!! asdkuerje!! I can't thank you enough!! AAAHH! *resorts to just tackle hugging...again* XD

haha, yep, Lyle is funny. I come up with the strangest lines and it somehow fits him. Neil is...well, he's the epitome of the "sexiest, awesomest man". I forgot to mention what he hit Lyle with...hmm, oh well. I was imaginging a piece of computer hard-disk or something. ^^;

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thelansera October 30 2008, 11:36:11 UTC
You can have the honor of doing that ahaha. I don't have the courage to post my LOL!work there, because the comm is filled with a lot of fabulous artists, hahaha.

Neil is...well, he's the epitome of the "sexiest, awesomest man".
OH. YES. I. AGREE. YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

And LOL @ the computer hard-disk, seriously XDDDDDDD
I was thinking of Haro for no apparent reason lololol.

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