Ambivalence - 01

[linsetsu]

Title: Ambivalence - 01
Fandom: Gundam 00
Characters/Pairing: Ali-Al-Saachez x Lockon Stratos  
Rating: T
Warnings:  There is no love. In this chapter, there are some swearing, and nothing awfully explicit.
Summary: Post episode 23. Lockon is alive and taken captive. He meets...
Disclaimer: I do not own Gundam 00, nor any of its characters.

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Comments

[ezri_sun]

I love it! Neil being face to face with the man that destroyed his family before he takes on the mask of a gundam Meister is really interesting. Also for him to live and be captured as well.

[linsetsu]

Thank you!!

Yup yup, writing two timelines in a single story will be interesting! If I can pull it off well enough, that is... >.>

[ezri_sun]

Its hard, but you seem to have at least started off well!

[linsetsu]

Thanks! ^_^ I'll do my best to try not to disappoint!!

[houkiwilder]

"Without warning, Ali put a hand against the Neil’s shoulder and shoved it none-too-gently against the wall. He felt the stiff muscles strain under the thin prisoner outfit and a small sound of agony slipped passed the young man’s parched lips. As if expecting just that, Ali took hold of the white chin with his other hand and pressed their mouths together.

The behaviour represented more a wolf attacking his prey than a kiss. The initiate impact held enough force to knock Neil’s head roughly against the wall, and Ali used the moment to pry his way into the youth’s mouth. Retaliation was quick but ineffective. As soon as Neil tried to bite down, Ali already had their tongues tangled and clamped his own teeth mercilessly together around the foreign piece of flesh."

Honestly? I died here. D:
My god, PLEASE continue this fic like... Forever. D: I'll never get tired of it.

[linsetsu]

*drags back into the world of the living*

lol! Forever is...kind of a long time... ^^; But I'll do my best to continue this for a...while...? haha

I'm glad you're liking it so far, and I'm honoured that my amateur writing is doing more than disappointing the readers ^^
Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!!

[houkiwilder]

Hahaha! XD
I'm really loving it! XD
New chapter pleeeeease? *-* XD

[linsetsu]

new chapter...new chapter....I'm working on it! >_