The Strange Affair Of The Ghost On Franklin Street - Part two

[linvro21]

Jared 2013

When Jared steps through the door from the studio-apartment into the office the next morning, Felicia is in already. He quickly checks his watch, but he’s not late, she’s early.

Comments

[deanshot]

I don't know whether I should be smiling or crying but I think I'll go with my first option because even though Jared died, he's now with Jensen and is happy.
This was an awesome story, liked the atmosphere of it and how it flowed across the page.
I also found it fitting that Danneel hid the emeralds in the jar of peanut butter, very smart thing to do and I was also happy that she had a good life even though she missed Jensen terribly.
Thanks for sharing.
*hugs*

[linvro21]

Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm all smiley now :)

[ashtraythief]

You did it! I'm so proud ;) 17k!!! And all the aweomse, and the shirts, and the lsudting and Jensen being suave and all the old school language! You really write a perfect fit for that prompt! *twirls you*

[linvro21]

I re-read it the otehr day on AO3 (because of a kudos mail I received) and I was surprised I wrote this. It read like someone elses story, guess it's really been too long :)

[thestarkat]

Such an awesome story. You hit every mark in both timelines. Jared's shirts were hysterical and I loved that he just kept changing jobs whenever something more interesting came along. Jensen's story was cool and moody and him entering Jared to feel along while Jared touched himself was incredible.

The ending was so sad/happy too. - “They probably wouldn’t have let you into the light wearing that shirt anyway.” - *huge grin*

Amazing job, hon!

[linvro21]

Thank you, sorry for answering this late!

[beelikej]

Loved this, so cool how they found a way to communicate. I also loved Felicia and this and the case(s) had me captured from the start. Kudos for making they way they finally really go together bittersweet.

[linvro21]

Dank je!