14 | Facade - G

[lipsticklullaby]

It wasn't a new feeling, this knot in her stomach. No, she'd felt it before: The way her breath quickened, her pulse racing at the mere thought of it--of him. It scared her, she'd admit that freely. She admitted it to him on occasion. She feared she would fall too fast, too hard, for this boy--no--man. His green eyes were captivating, his

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[tondada]

Your writing is painfully vivid and moving. Wow! "a love that was so unrequited it pained her to the marrow" . . . and your phrasing is so untypical and effective. Beautiful work!!