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Fic: Know Her (8/?) LoVe

Mar 12, 2006 16:57

Title: Know Her (8/?)
Author: lipstikstain
Pairing: LoVe, mentions Duncan, and Daddy Mars
Word Count: 3, 406
Rating: R for language and very light sexual situations, but eventually some NC-17 LoVe
Spoilers: Nothing at all - but to be safe all of season 1 and all episodes aired so far in season 2
Summary: Finally earning the right to know Veronica’s ( Read more... )

fic, know her

Comments 29

bandgeekzule March 13 2006, 15:35:30 UTC

Hey great story you got going here. All the dialogue is absolutely fab.

Also, just an fyi, in the line:
..."trying to make me here this shit! Weevil’s gang..."
I believe its the other hear.

Other than that can't wait for more.

lipstikstain March 13 2006, 16:27:28 UTC

Ah! *bangs head against wall*

Thanks for pointing that out!

marty2103 March 13 2006, 15:44:48 UTC

OMG I am hooked on this fic, I love how Logan had to earn his right to talk to her, slowly. I wonder how Duncan is gonna react when he knows Logan is there and that his whole fairytale is about to get trashed.

And I looove that we have music at the end of the chapter, the last song was amazing and so is this one!!!

lipstikstain March 13 2006, 16:28:02 UTC

Thank you soooo much!

I'll try to keep the music thing going till the end of the fic.

la623 March 13 2006, 17:24:20 UTC

I LOVE IT! :) He's gonna fight for her! :) Can't wait to read the rest!

lipstikstain March 13 2006, 17:33:24 UTC

I know, I'm such a "tortured Logan" fan...I don't know why, but I am.

la623 March 13 2006, 19:10:38 UTC

LOL! I'm right there with you!!! :)

lapdogdesign March 13 2006, 18:19:32 UTC

Wow. Another great chapter and another great song. The image of a sodden Logan and Veronica standing in her doorway, while "Secret Smile" plays in the background is such an awesome one. Of course Logan would force the issue with the kiss, because, it's Logan and he always forces the issue, and because he'd gone through so many trials with her friends to get there.

Please don't apologize for your story being a long one. Long fics are the best!

Can't wait to see Duncan's reaction. Fury or resignation? Please update soon.

lipstikstain March 13 2006, 19:08:51 UTC

Thanks so much - I feel better about writing long chapters now.

As for Duncan...hm...a little trapped with the Duncan thing.

I want to stay true to the character.

Will he be passive? Is he going to be fierce?

lapdogdesign March 13 2006, 19:35:26 UTC

I don't think Duncan's ever been fierce, except when he was beating up his car with a shovel, and I think that was an epileptic fit.

I can't see him just walking away from this situation, but fury isn't really his way. BUT if were ever to get fierce, it would be when he's about to lose Veronica forever. To Logan.

Hmmm. Lots of ways to go from here. But your previous chapters were excellent so I'm not worried! :)

lipstikstain March 13 2006, 20:01:21 UTC

Definitely. The possibilities are *exxxxxxcellent*

Hm...maybe territorial?

But Duncan has always been, and no offense to all Duncan lovers and sympathizers out there, naively kind to people and quick to believe whatever people tell him.

Thanks for the ideas and the gracious compliments.

sitebuilderchic March 13 2006, 21:44:50 UTC

woah. absolutely amazing. totally loVed it! bravo!

lipstikstain March 13 2006, 22:50:04 UTC

Why, thank you. Try to update A.S.A.P. but I have a crap load of homework to do, and I'm aiming to graduate within a decade.

sitebuilderchic March 13 2006, 23:45:30 UTC

lol same here!