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Nov 28, 2005 04:48

I would want to describe the sound of a leaf being blown across cement by wind

but I do not know how to do that

if you figure it out, let me know.
as soon as possible

thanks

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tararee November 28 2005, 10:46:56 UTC
Scratchy.

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+ jabberwok November 28 2005, 18:59:04 UTC
....skitter....

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wow freshmanmeat November 29 2005, 00:12:31 UTC
that was beautiful. i just imagined it in my mind, and it was the most beautiful sound in the world.

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pumpkin_popeil November 29 2005, 14:56:16 UTC
how about:

the static-colored complaint of a rusty paw drowning skyward.

or actually t.s. elliot said:

a pair of ragged claws
Scuttling across the floors of silent seas.

so thats better really.
but he wasnt talking about leaves.
fuckin ts.

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