tl;dr: ah i'm loserretrauxJuly 11 2011, 00:45:22 UTC
lmao okay for one afaik i have ONE prompt i owe you SINGULAR NOT PLURAL >:C and on a more legit note i've... kind of been stressing out about it a lot anyway
like i know i haven't written it and i'm really sorry but i honestly haven't forgotten about it IT'S PRETTY MUCH THE OPPOSITE. in fact i kind of made this post with it in mind because i hoped if i could start feeling good about my writing again then i would be able to get back to some of the fucking COUNTLESS fics i have lying around abandoned (or not even started, in a few cases)
...lmao okay so i've been kind of vaguely trying to avoid talking about it until now but ngl i'm sort of in this constant state of hating everything i've ever written WHICH OBVIOUSLY BECOMES JUST PLAIN SELF-LOATHING BECAUSE I VIEW MY WRITING AS THE ONE THING I ACTUALLY HAVE LEFT AS A MEASURE OF SELF-WORTH (seriously fic is a really embarrassingly big deal to me, idek) so yeah more or less
♡ ages of ruin 1/2. (jin/takaya? + chidori)retrauxJuly 12 2011, 03:23:16 UTC
oh gosh this isn't even exactly what you asked for?? it's more jin gen than takaya/jin :x sorry! and um, i can write you something else if you want, i guess?"Don't you ever wonder about it," Chidori asks him, once, as they walk the streets of Iwatodai together yet entirely alone; unaccustomed to one another despite everything. It is the first and last time they find themselves as two and Takaya's absence unsettles something in Jin he cannot quite explain-as though in it he has lost a part of himself. The midnight hour has passed but the streets are still comfortingly dark, deserted with it. Chidori's crisp footsteps echo into one another like the last sounds of the world
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♡ ages of ruin 2/2. (jin/takaya? + chidori)retrauxJuly 12 2011, 03:24:54 UTC
Chidori turns away from him again after a moment of what could be hesitation. He considers the shape of her shadow in the quiet glow of the streetlights, again and again, and almost sees a fall of feathers in the frills of her dress. ('We are but lambs to the slaughter. What have we lost, Jin? What do we have left and what, what have we lost
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Re: ♡ ages of ruin 2/2. (jin/takaya? + chidori)baxaronnJuly 12 2011, 03:46:03 UTC
oh
excuse me, I'll just be sitting here re-reading this for about forever.
Chidori is my ♥ favorite ♥ so of course I don't mind you writing about her!! And it's so perfect the way you did, the way she's so very far from Jin even though they're together, the way she's different. The subtle bird references - the image of her as a phoenix, if I'm reading that right? So beautiful. *w*
And your Jin is so perfect, your Takaya so perfectly wise and utterly insane. You have the best Strega. :D
I'LL TRY TO DO SOMETHING WITH MAMI LATER ONCE I'VE RE-WATCHED EP3 but for now uhhh someone else requested shadow rise/shadow naoto which i've already filled so idk if it's exactly what you want for the second prompt (if it's not then i'll write you something new) but maybe check that out???
no i'm def. cool with this, rise/naoto is one of my favorite pairings, so! yesss, this was an excellent read, ty v. much! i love the little quips you threw in the parenthesis, and the part where rise's lipstick marks naoto's cheek. great work!
ALSO I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU COME UP WITH FOR MAMI SHE IS LEGIT MY FAVORITE CHARACTER RN...
♡ the blade of a plucked flower 1/2. (mami gen; warning for gore)retrauxJuly 12 2011, 21:54:31 UTC
I'M SORRY THIS IS WEIRD?? i don't even dislike it necessarily but ngl it's... not really what i originally set out to write lmao. so i think it might seem kind of jarring in some points and not flow well, idk. if you want me to write you something different then just tell me :U and ftr i think i might also properly post this, if you're okay with that?
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For the first time in a while, she truly feels alive. Her hands curl around her guns effortlessly, finger hooking into the trigger of another and another, all like interlocking pieces to a puzzle the solution of which she is now bit-by-bit beginning to remember, rediscovering the size and shape of it all-'ah, this is what this is.' The metal of them is clinging and cold against her skin but inside, in the now-hollows of her heart that have been cleared of their burdens, made fresh and empty and new, she is filled with an inexplicable warmth
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♡ a line around gravity. (shadow rise/shadow naoto)retrauxJuly 11 2011, 22:07:53 UTC
um oh gosh sorry this is really bad :x i could try to write you something else if you don't like it?"Stay with me," he says, slow and soft, a whining hiss-like some small, miserable animal trapped in its skin and eating away at itself: all hopeless-pride, all quiet-desperation. He raises a hand to his eyes and the sleeve of his labcoat falls over his fingers; his clothes cling oddly, to his hipbones and shoulders and arms, all at angles. He stands looking almost like a child in the wake of a girl who was never one
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you know what i want
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i'm sorry miss i promise i'll get it done one day...
in the meantime maybe i'll try to commentbox you some smut of them or something, idk
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the point of this post was for requests
why are you taking prompts
when you already have perfectly good prompts you've been owing me
ALEX I EXPECT SOME FORM OF SMUT BY THE TIME I GET BACK FROM THE GROCERY ):
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like i know i haven't written it and i'm really sorry but i honestly haven't forgotten about it IT'S PRETTY MUCH THE OPPOSITE. in fact i kind of made this post with it in mind because i hoped if i could start feeling good about my writing again then i would be able to get back to some of the fucking COUNTLESS fics i have lying around abandoned (or not even started, in a few cases)
...lmao okay so i've been kind of vaguely trying to avoid talking about it until now but ngl i'm sort of in this constant state of hating everything i've ever written WHICH OBVIOUSLY BECOMES JUST PLAIN SELF-LOATHING BECAUSE I VIEW MY WRITING AS THE ONE THING I ACTUALLY HAVE LEFT AS A MEASURE OF SELF-WORTH (seriously fic is a really embarrassingly big deal to me, idek) so yeah more or less
I MEAN I'LL KEEP TRYING but for real man
i'm baaaad at feels
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only thing i read in this entire post
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but seriously
i so can
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THAT GUY FROM AA YOU LIKE SO MUCH X YOU THIS LINE MUST BE SPOKEN GO GO GO
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you x chris hansen
because lmao seriously erin you're
you're pushing it here okay...
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or ummmm anything with Terezi and freaky alien biology? Because there's not enough of that, either!
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excuse me, I'll just be sitting here re-reading this for about forever.
Chidori is my ♥ favorite ♥ so of course I don't mind you writing about her!! And it's so perfect the way you did, the way she's so very far from Jin even though they're together, the way she's different. The subtle bird references - the image of her as a phoenix, if I'm reading that right? So beautiful. *w*
And your Jin is so perfect, your Takaya so perfectly wise and utterly insane. You have the best Strega. :D
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or give me something with p4 "other self" shadows because idk they're all so damn sexual and slutty shadows are relevant to my interests
BUT I DON'T EVEN CARE BRO, WRITE ANYTHING -- WORK YOUR MAGIC
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oh
no i'm def. cool with this, rise/naoto is one of my favorite pairings, so!
yesss, this was an excellent read, ty v. much! i love the little quips you threw in the parenthesis, and the part where rise's lipstick marks naoto's cheek. great work!
ALSO I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU COME UP WITH FOR MAMI SHE IS LEGIT MY FAVORITE CHARACTER RN...
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For the first time in a while, she truly feels alive. Her hands curl around her guns effortlessly, finger hooking into the trigger of another and another, all like interlocking pieces to a puzzle the solution of which she is now bit-by-bit beginning to remember, rediscovering the size and shape of it all-'ah, this is what this is.' The metal of them is clinging and cold against her skin but inside, in the now-hollows of her heart that have been cleared of their burdens, made fresh and empty and new, she is filled with an inexplicable warmth ( ... )
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