Comments | lisa_yamada: Why did you do this to me?! : Chapter 1 + 2

lisa_yamada

Why did you do this to me?! : Chapter 1 + 2

Mar 15, 2011 21:50

TITLE : Why are did you do this to me?!
AUTHOR : ( Read more... )

daiki arioka, hikaru yaotome, fanfic: why did you do this to me?!, me, yuto nakajima, yuri chinen, yuya takaki, ryutaro morimoto, kei inoo, ryosuke yamada, keito okamoto, yabu kota, hey say jump

Comments 9

aniereimagic March 15 2011, 17:50:03 UTC

You wrote it finally ne?

lisa_yamada March 15 2011, 22:56:39 UTC

Hahaha...yep!!

a_k_k_h_n March 16 2011, 06:02:13 UTC

sounds interesting~

lisa_yamada March 16 2011, 08:59:50 UTC

sanks~~ ^__^

emerald_love_96 March 16 2011, 12:31:36 UTC

hmm~ O____O
you still need to improve your writing, but I dont mind as long as the story is nice, right? |D
*run away*

lisa_yamada March 16 2011, 13:29:51 UTC

Sanks for commenting... how can i improve?! What do i do?! ^^

lisa_yamada March 16 2011, 13:56:16 UTC

Chapter 3 is up... XD and im gonna post chapter 4 tomorrow. PLEASE READ! ^_^

hachortle July 15 2011, 06:36:07 UTC

hahaha when I saw arashi I couldn't stop smiling LOL ♥
omoshiroi :3 but try stay consistent maybe? Like some parts you used 'I' instead of Lisa/she said/did,etc.
But it's good :)

lisa_yamada July 16 2011, 06:45:21 UTC

thankyou! because the chibi chii is a arashi fanboy~~~ hahaha... YEA.. >_< i'll do my best! please read the other chapters too! ^^