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lisa_yamada

3 UPDATES!! - Why did you do this to me?! : Chapter 4+5+6

Mar 17, 2011 19:25

TITLE : Why are did you do this to me?!
AUTHOR : ( Read more... )

daiki arioka, hikaru yaotome, fanfic: why did you do this to me?!, me, yuto nakajima, yuri chinen, yuya takaki, ryutaro morimoto, kei inoo, ryosuke yamada, keito okamoto, yabu kota, hey say jump

Comments 6

a_k_k_h_n March 17 2011, 09:22:08 UTC

uwaa so sweet~

lisa_yamada March 17 2011, 10:29:18 UTC

SANKS~~ ^__^

aniereimagic March 17 2011, 12:41:41 UTC

Waiting for next chapter...thats where the real fun begins

lisa_yamada March 17 2011, 13:18:17 UTC

Maybe...XD... hahaha

emerald_love_96 March 17 2011, 16:44:20 UTC

my GOD LOL
haha~ I am overacting XD
by the way, some check, if you dont mind :)
not protection, but in general we use safety or something like that, my mind arent working now :P
use clinic instead sickbay. because its more general :)

about my comment yesterday,
use different words, not just one word.
use more specific one. like, chuckled;laughed;wry laugh;etc :)
and~
the easiest way to improve is.....
read more fic :) especially if the author is well-known already :D

heck, I am sorry for blabbering DX sorry if I sounds like a senior :(
^_^

lisa_yamada March 18 2011, 11:39:18 UTC

hahahahah... ok~! ok! XD
sankyoU! ^__^ hehehe