I like it. It's very beautiful, in a quiet sort of way. If you want some constructive criticism, just reply to this comment, and I'll reply back. I just don't wanna throw comments in your face. :D ..I don't make sense.
hey lisa, its chris. i would have commented earlier but my computer didnt work for a bit. Anyways, its very well written. Good job. Way better than anything ive written hehe. you did a great job with the descriptive details and putting me in yer position. it was quite depressing if i do say so myself.
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If you want some constructive criticism, just reply to this comment, and I'll reply back. I just don't wanna throw comments in your face. :D ..I don't make sense.
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Nice Job,
Chris <3
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